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denby is on page 294 of 384
the problem w this is that nothing that happens seems like it actually matters. nora is fine the whole time, meeting and abandoning jackson hasn’t mattered at all, the egg computer thing was barely a blip, emilie was barely relevant + even the bumblebee has mattered way less than i assumed it would. plus the dialogue is truly just LIFELESS i feel like these people have never met before let alone are sisters
Jul 26, 2026 09:29PM
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denby is on page 195 of 384
i’m invested enough to keep reading this book but it is unfortunately neither particularly well-written nor interesting
Jul 24, 2026 10:27PM
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