Jake DeGear’s Reviews > Games: A Love Story > Status Update

That chapter was 40 pages too long, but I feel for her I guess. At least she’s real with being in the wrong. And realized she’s been an ass to her friends

I hate her and understand her, I’m impressed with the depth I’m getting here lowkey. But god damn, give a brother some chapter breaks. I’m sick of this 70 pages shit

Longest chapter ever, but glad she’s doing better (for the most part)

This past chapter was interesting… I thought the dialogue was engaging, though not necessarily realistic for a normal conversation. The prose itself was fine but came across as lazy at times, incredibly heavy on the backstory as a sort of “flashback” while not really furthering the plot in anyway. Frustrating