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Okay, so the seedy noir detective voice wouldn't work with Tchaikovsky's description of the science and all, but when he returns to the actual story, I still want to hear Bogey.
This seems like a dark revisioning of The Rats of N.I.M.H.
— Jul 27, 2026 09:27PM
This seems like a dark revisioning of The Rats of N.I.M.H.
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John Payton
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Ouch, sound weapon!
The war sounds like most of our d&d campaigns.
They got Lulu! Lousy good-for-nothing stoats!
— Aug 02, 2026 09:17PM
The war sounds like most of our d&d campaigns.
They got Lulu! Lousy good-for-nothing stoats!
John Payton
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No! They got Sly!
No! They shot Lulu!
Dang, it's dangerous to be Scotch's friend.
— Aug 01, 2026 09:21PM
No! They shot Lulu!
Dang, it's dangerous to be Scotch's friend.
John Payton
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I can just imagine how the Green Cities got started.
Liberals: "We should build self-sustaining, ecologically friendly cities where no one has to work!"
Conservatives: "Hell no!"
Liberals: "You can have genetically engineered slaves."
Conservatives: "I'm listening..."
— Jul 28, 2026 09:18PM
Liberals: "We should build self-sustaining, ecologically friendly cities where no one has to work!"
Conservatives: "Hell no!"
Liberals: "You can have genetically engineered slaves."
Conservatives: "I'm listening..."
John Payton
is 17% done
Sly - There's a Tumblr post which claims foxes are cat software running on dog hardware. Suspect that Tchaikovsky is aware of this.
"Squirrels are nuts" 😄
I have no beef with the reader's voice or his skills, but I kind of wish he'd chosen the noir detective style of narration.
— Jul 27, 2026 12:31AM
"Squirrels are nuts" 😄
I have no beef with the reader's voice or his skills, but I kind of wish he'd chosen the noir detective style of narration.