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Brittany Michaele
Brittany Michaele is 9% done
I don't like describing anyone as "fat" but then labeling another character as soft around the middle. why is this description acceptable for one character and not another.
Jul 28, 2026 04:33PM
Close Reading (Lavender House Book 1)

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Brittany Michaele
Brittany Michaele is 7% done
"I know Bea speaks of her with a tenderness Bea reserves for people she has decided to protect—not everyone, and not lightly—and this tells me something I don’t yet have the context to interpret. Bea’s protectiveness is a signal. It means there is something to protect, something that happened, something that made the protection necessary."
Idk if this is a style choice but I do not like it.
Jul 28, 2026 04:07PM
Close Reading (Lavender House Book 1)


Brittany Michaele
Brittany Michaele is 5% done
Soooooo this has the feeling of an AI written AITA reel from Facebook.
"The blazer fits as all my blazers do: precisely, because I have them tailored, because the difference between a blazer that fits and a blazer that almost fits is the difference between armor and a costume, and I stopped wearing costumes a long time ago." Idk not liking this so far.
Jul 28, 2026 01:50PM
Close Reading (Lavender House Book 1)


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