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The tone has slipped a bit. I have no problem with femme characters or with men expressing more feminine characteristics. For me dynamic between Hugh and Domingo has become somewhat incongruous. I wonder if this was written as a m/f scene at some point (?) it certainly has that feel.
— May 07, 2017 03:34PM
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The plot thickens. Finishes at 96%.
*3 Stars*
— May 12, 2017 05:11PM
*3 Stars*
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I have a really bad feeling about this fight.
— May 12, 2017 04:44PM
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Hello, Mr. Black. Dressed all in black. With back hair and black eyes. And black gloves, like a serial killer. I'm intrigued by Mr. Black.
— May 12, 2017 11:18AM
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This is all over the place. Hugh is, well, about as much use as a chocolate fireguard. Protesting but not doing anything about any of it. Including not actively searching for Shiloh. As for trying to make Domingo sympathetic? Don't! Just don't even try.
— May 08, 2017 12:48PM
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I don't care about Hugh anymore. He's been usurped by a kitten.
— May 08, 2017 07:46AM
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"We are who we are. We do what we do."
Domingo is "bat shit" cray-cray.
— May 07, 2017 12:57PM
Domingo is "bat shit" cray-cray.
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"I'm new." Hugh sat back (...) "You know how it goes. I haven't had my hopes snuffed out yet. My individuality crushed. My empathy reduced to fear in a handful of dust. Something like that."
— May 07, 2017 12:38PM
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I am grumpy and disgruntled. Time to enjoy someone else's misery. Hugh you are a muppet (slang for a clueless idiot btw). I think you just entered poo poo creek without a paddle.
— May 07, 2017 07:59AM
