Violet ♡’s Reviews > Ashwalker > Status Update

so the story got a lot better about the eye. you slowly stop hearing her complain about her eye until its actually pertinent to the story. i love the intimacy and banter of these two. its paced really well. my only gripe is that the whole thing started with these girls going on a quest for these lost documents, and every person who's tried to retrieve them has died. this is never referenced again....