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I can't stand Temple. Someone needs to punch him.
Jul 31, 2026 11:45AM
A Fatal Crossing

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I can't help but feel this is a plot hole in chapter 5. He keeps saying how unlikely or improbable it is for someone to go up stairs and then turn ones back to them. But when you reach the top, of course your back would be to them because they are now behind you. I want to smack this supposed "smart" detective.
Jul 28, 2026 06:24PM
A Fatal Crossing


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