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Brit Hvide, where where you?
Youre supposed to have edited this book!
I know fantasy writing and how the dramatic use of language takes longer to tell tbe story than in other genres, but dear God, girl! I find myself editing the bloated sentences and phases of Hannah Whitten, and I'm not being paid!
There are 430 pages in this copy and at page 86, I can already tell it could have been written in less than 200.
— Aug 03, 2026 06:37PM
Youre supposed to have edited this book!
I know fantasy writing and how the dramatic use of language takes longer to tell tbe story than in other genres, but dear God, girl! I find myself editing the bloated sentences and phases of Hannah Whitten, and I'm not being paid!
There are 430 pages in this copy and at page 86, I can already tell it could have been written in less than 200.
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