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itselv
is 45% done
Got a bit used to the humor style! Two minor scenes happened that recontextualized some aspects
1. Someone who was rude in his inner monologue had it slip into his actions and got called out for that.
2. A bar scene acknowledged a dynamic and turned it from off-putting to adorable and funny.
Always fun when the author is aware of how their characters are coming across and is playing with it rather than around it.
— 7 hours, 50 min ago
1. Someone who was rude in his inner monologue had it slip into his actions and got called out for that.
2. A bar scene acknowledged a dynamic and turned it from off-putting to adorable and funny.
Always fun when the author is aware of how their characters are coming across and is playing with it rather than around it.
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itselv
is 15% done
Not liking the way anyone is talking about anyone.. feels like an attempt to be funny? But is ultimately off-putting.
— Aug 01, 2026 09:12AM