Kiersten Goodfellow’s Reviews > Wolf Worm > Status Update

The internal monologue of the narrator is frustratingly annoying. We don’t need 7 pages of you “thinking” about how eerie it is that your boss is going into the woods in the middle of the night. We don’t need you to state every possibility of why he’s doing it. It’s unneeded and honestly takes away from the suspense. 👎👎would be much better without. I don’t care what you’re thinking GIVE ME PLOT