Hanna’s Reviews > The Colony > Status Update

I despise these mid-sentence switches:
'She recoiled a little, but he followed, chasing her with his eyes, his pencil, pinning me down, holding me in place as he drew, looking intermittently at the paper, at the lines and curves on the page, then back at me, at my face, my eyes, scraping and scratching, as though trying to enter me through my eyes.'
Ooh, look at me, aren't I clever. No, Audrey, you're just annoying.