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It's almost time to go and there's been no talking?
Gee, I am shocked!

I see you shiver with antici-



Pation

Good thing somebody missed this because I sure as fuck didn't

"Maybe this was a bad idea"
MAYBE?
Going into heavily surveilled enemy territory for a rendezvous is only maybe a bad idea!

Luckily living in a surveillance state and the implications of that only come up peripherally

Would've been scared we could have a second sympathetic female character if we didn't antagonize her quickly enough!

Babe there's a lot of contenders for your fatal flaw, being unable to walk away from a challenge ain't it

Cool story bro.
Now what is the plot of this book?

Glad to be well informed about everybody's jealousy issues amidst a war

Could we at least pretend to do the slightest bit of plot