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Kelsey
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Jennette...
I mean this respectfully:
Your memoir was great.
but writing fiction isn't for everyone...
— 1 hour, 24 min ago
I mean this respectfully:
Your memoir was great.
but writing fiction isn't for everyone...
Kelsey
is on page 74 of 288
This is NOT the same quality as I'm Glad My Mom Died.
I'll give it some time but... it's not great so far.
Also I can't get over a 17 year old girl using the term "tasking a leak" twice within 10 pages..
Also the fact her name is Waldo screams "Trying too hard to make her quirky".
It doesn't read as "coming-of-age", but rather desperate.
— 6 hours, 35 min ago
I'll give it some time but... it's not great so far.
Also I can't get over a 17 year old girl using the term "tasking a leak" twice within 10 pages..
Also the fact her name is Waldo screams "Trying too hard to make her quirky".
It doesn't read as "coming-of-age", but rather desperate.