Joel’s Reviews > The Way of Edan > Status Update
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is 47% done
Finding this a bit of a slog as I'm having a problem with 2 things: 1) the author is very descriptive which isn't necessarily a problem, but I'm find him redundantly descriptive rather than additively descriptive. 2) The MC is dumb! Please don't advance plot by making your characters do obviously stupid things.
— Aug 07, 2026 07:39AM
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