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“He looks older than I remember”

No shit. It’s been a few years 😂

So you’re telling me she strolls right into the palace, unmasked, and no one recognises her?

It’s only been like 3 years? Huh?

Okay soooo no one thought she died.. no. They thought she’d escaped.

From what?

Cos they certainly don’t think he’s evil

So many plot holes and inconsistencies 🤦🏻‍♀️

It was going so well….until he said after she vanished, he searched everywhere for her

Umm, the world thought she was dead

They never even spoke

She didn’t know he existed

That’s….creepy

Another example of things not adding up

The fmc leaves her trusted friend (?) above deck, announces she’s going to check the rooms below. He hears this….and goes to sleep with a girl? And she catches them??

What? How stupid?

He’s asking to be caught.

What is the actual purpose of this scene?

There are so many inconsistencies and its starting to get on my nerves

Most recently:

p126 - Domino, one second she's talking to the mmc. The fmc walks off and finds her fishing (ON THE SAME PAGE)

Oh so he doesn’t know she’s alive??

I’m so confused

I. Am. So. Confused.

Sooo William had her SA’d and killed.

But then theres a 3yr time jump. Suddenly he thinks he’s in love and courting her?? Yet everyone still thinks she’s dead?? Whaaat?

I’m so confused. What is going on?