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Part II was a disappointment. The story lacked depth and offered no more insight into Cathy’s thoughts than reading Nelly’s narration. A first-person perspective should provide more than simple recounting with “I said” rather than “She said”.
— Aug 09, 2026 02:26PM
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Ivan
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The story relies heavily on telling rather than showing. Even the parts that add depth feel awkwardly patched together and lack overall cohesion.
— Aug 09, 2026 07:39AM
Ivan
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Chapter 1 was just amazing; it was a stark opening. However, everything that followed in Part One was underwhelming… I will wait a bit more before I make any harsh judgements.
— Aug 08, 2026 12:30PM