Kirsten’s Reviews > A Novel Death > Status Update
Kirsten
is 22% done
I'm 22% through and there is a glaring issue for me. the MC mentions no one's been in the store for the past two years since her aunt died. But she just signed up and crossed out her aunt's name on an app for a fair. What happened the previous year? How come the booth was saved at a prime location for 2 years and had a pre-filled app? And there's much interest in the store but nobody's made a move for 2 years?
— Aug 10, 2026 02:18AM
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