Jack Goff’s Reviews > Green City Wars > Status Update
Jack Goff
is 50% done
There is a lot of good stuff here, but it is very bogged down with world building that is not necessary for the story. I feel like this could have been left out, or put in the back of the book as extra material. Also, the world building we DO need isn't explained until halfway through??
— Aug 11, 2026 08:22AM
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Jack Goff
is starting
I am almost three hours in, and man it is very hard to keep up with what is going on. And who is who. And how this world works. I don't know if my ADHD butt can do this. lol
— Aug 10, 2026 01:54PM