Melanie’s Reviews > The Five-Star Weekend > Status Update

- Elin is very "readable" but it does sometimes grate that her writing style (at least in this book, I can't remember if it was like this in the 2 others I've read) is very exposition-y. Lots of telling instead of showing.

- This might be an audio quirk but some of the switches between perspectives feel jarring and fast. Maybe it would feel smoother reading in print.

- Electra is a way too on the nose villain name.