Marla’s Reviews > Lost in the Garden > Status Update
Marla
is 75% done
Alright, NOW I see the significant pacing issues. It's so interesting but drags terribly between interesting parts.
— Aug 11, 2026 07:52PM
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Marla
is 30% done
I really don't understand the point of Antonia's character, she just whines and pines, if she were cut completely it wouldn't hurt the narrative (I think it would improve it). Besides that, still a good time, love the writing.
— Aug 11, 2026 03:45PM
Marla
is 15% done
This went from zero to full weird very quickly, I'm enjoying it so far.
— Aug 10, 2026 02:36PM