mudslug’s Reviews > A Study in Drowning > Status Update

i have SO many thoughts. the way effy suddenly had to exposit everything was a little janky but honestly i like the take on changelings well done miss ava

me when i chortle

nvm she killed it by writing “Effy snorted” dawg

that was a pretty good dialogue back and forth

this sentence is really pissing me off “she looked in the driveway for Ianto’s car, but—blessedly—it was gone.”

i feel like we really didn’t need that comma like the punctuation is all perfectly correct but as a whole it just reads weird
and yes i need everyone to know how much it’s stressing me out i can’t stop thinking about it

naw he’s so charming

HOLY SHIT?

man i love preston he’s great

Florida.

Alright, so the main character is racist. That’s potentially fine if she uhhh stops that later on. But Ava Reid has written a book before where there’s lowkey racist undertones that don’t get addressed, so I’m gonna put a pin in that.