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Jordon
Jordon is 7% done
So far there’s a LOT of telling rather than showing, it’s literally the MC describing the story of the book, so we the reader can understand the situation she’s in having woken up inside said book. I’m waiting for the pivotal moment that I assume will change the way the story is being told and it will feel more immersive. This book also has a very high rating, so I’m intrigued.
Aug 12, 2026 03:57PM
This Kingdom Will Not Kill Me (Maggie the Undying, #1)

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Jordon
Jordon is 50% done
Finally something interesting has happened. I nearly DNF'ed this at 35%, pushed through to 50% and only now am I feeling like I want to keep reading. Not great!
Sep 05, 2026 04:26AM
This Kingdom Will Not Kill Me (Maggie the Undying, #1)


Jordon
Jordon is 33% done
This is feeling like a slog, the info dumping is very annoying. The premise is really interesting but I'm not sure I can push through all the info dumping that pauses the story. I'll keep trying as everyone seems to love this story, although maybe it's because there's people who finish this story vs the people who DNF it and can't get through it.
Aug 29, 2026 04:28AM
This Kingdom Will Not Kill Me (Maggie the Undying, #1)


Jordon
Jordon is 22% done
There sure is a lot of info dumping, I’m getting lost with all the details.
Aug 18, 2026 02:44PM
This Kingdom Will Not Kill Me (Maggie the Undying, #1)


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