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"...If it's not an answer, if it's not the piece you've been looking for, don't let ir break you."
"It's okay, Mom," said Tory. She deftly extricated her wrist, bending to press a kiss against her mother's temple before she said, "I'm already broken."
I rolled my eyes so fucking hard lmao
— Aug 13, 2026 06:22AM
"It's okay, Mom," said Tory. She deftly extricated her wrist, bending to press a kiss against her mother's temple before she said, "I'm already broken."
I rolled my eyes so fucking hard lmao
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Bethany
is on page 38 of 448
I can't believe this book opened with a vicious mermaid attack and yet I'm bored out of my mind. I don't think the reader needs to see every moment leading up to getting on the boat. It should've opened on the boat and anything important from before could've been mention in other ways. This is a weird instance where telling is better than showing imo.
— Aug 13, 2026 06:13AM