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Main character has to die dude
I have no qualms with the writing, but I find myself getting antsy about the length. I’m just kind of wondering how much you can get out of Dead Man stalks MC for revenge..
I want to see how things works out, but at this point, it does feel a little like it’s showing its hand a little early. We’ll see if that ends up making sense. I do have faith, even if I’m a little worried
— 12 hours, 49 min ago
I have no qualms with the writing, but I find myself getting antsy about the length. I’m just kind of wondering how much you can get out of Dead Man stalks MC for revenge..
I want to see how things works out, but at this point, it does feel a little like it’s showing its hand a little early. We’ll see if that ends up making sense. I do have faith, even if I’m a little worried
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