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Starting to understand some qualms. Time skip feels awkward as it stands. Would have preferred just cutting from Miles and Lily’s pitch to where they were in the future instead of giving an Undercover Boss “Where Are They Now?” bit. Ugh. It’s better now that it’s back to specifics though, but yeah, chapter 20 is entirely unnecessary

I think maybe people hate this book because they have expectations for it that it doesn’t live up to? Whereas I just grabbed it cause I thought it seemed vaguely interesting. Because so far, I’m seriously vibing with the writing, the way it’s progressing, etc. I think it’s a very nuanced and interesting examination of one man’s inner life, and that’s very neat to me. Hopefully it doesn’t totally flub up

It’s still good so far, but maybe I’m insane. People on here have said it starts good and just deteriorates, which, if true, SUCKS because this intro stuff is really grabbing me :[

Actually kinda based so far I don’t know why the rating is so low :(