Gabrielly’s Reviews > First-Time Caller > Status Update

I fell like this book has me in a hostage situation
the story goes absolutely nowhere…
There’s like 200pages of internal monologues that do not contribute to the story whatsoever, I mean these pages could have been used to actually develop the mother-daughter relationship and make the MMC fall for her. I mean I’m in the middle of a spicy scene and she has to tell him what to do?!!! WTF AIDEN GET IN THERE