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Beetle
Beetle is 29% done
I’m really struggling with myself on this one. The MC has Asperger’s, which the author can’t help but mention a symptom of at least twice a page. Refreshing for a detective to be not just neurodivergent-coded, but explicitly on the spectrum. But immediately all that goodwill was lost because the author can’t stop talking about it??

And there’s an awful mistake… rant continued in a new update
Aug 17, 2026 04:07AM
The Dentist (The DS Cross Mysteries #1)

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Beetle
Beetle is 55% done
this book is Bad but I can’t stop reading bc what if the good part comes just after I give up?
Aug 20, 2026 08:18AM
The Dentist (The DS Cross Mysteries #1)


Beetle
Beetle is 30% done
There’s an awful mistake where the detective watches the suspect in his cell and explicitly says “I think he doesn’t remember what happened” and then no more than 5 pages later, the detective says “I’m beginning to think he doesn’t remember”.

Kind of a weird mistake in writing for a character that’s a savant with a “photographic recall”, no?

Don’t get me wrong I’m still gonna read it tho
Aug 17, 2026 04:10AM
The Dentist (The DS Cross Mysteries #1)


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