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Kat
is 15% done
Not to nitpick but I feel like it makes NO sense for the protagonist to be this clueless about faeries when her sister was stolen as a kid and she planned all her life to go and get her back
— Aug 18, 2026 10:58AM
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Kat
is 25% done
All of this honestly feels very jarring and oddly paced so far… I almost think it would have been better off without the longtime rivals element, because there just simply wasn’t enough time to establish their rivalry in a way that feels believable
— Aug 18, 2026 07:12PM