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Michelle
Michelle is on page 258 of 293
There is too much internal dialogue/exposition from Red and it’s getting annoying. I am skimming whole paragraphs at a time because it does nothing to advance the story or reveal anything new.
I thought I might be rating it a 5 but now think a 3.
Aug 18, 2026 06:33PM
The Girl in Red

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Michelle
Michelle is on page 100 of 293
The italicized and parenthetical exposition gets tedious about a third of the way in.
Aug 18, 2026 11:07AM
The Girl in Red


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