Jet’s Reviews > When the Moon Hatched > Status Update
Jet
is 16% done
I’m getting Sarah J. Maas flashbacks (this is not a positive connotation), however, *this assassin* isn’t a blatant pick-me, so I can deal. Some passages feel like they were written with a thesaurus open next to the author, which is…frustrating. I’m a girlie that enjoys prose a shade darker than lavender, but even I am needing less flourish, more actual explanation of a scene. Less can be more and be good!
— Aug 19, 2026 12:37PM
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Jet
is 17% done
A PAGE LATER the character that we’ve not really met???? Just to feed the MC’s plot and give her reason to move forward? Lots of telling without showing there, hoping once the author gets her stride there will be less jarring moments like that, what a decision! 😭
— Aug 22, 2026 07:06PM

