Ash (BooksToAshes)’s Reviews > Undone > Status Update

I was really hoping this book would touch upon the emotional side of the characters, unfortunately it feels like sex is used as a prop too often. It’s making the emotional moments just become physical :/ tad disappointed since I saw my depression in Lily and hoped it would be handled a bit better

AHHH we got an MM moment 😭

The male golden retriever, flirty personality being kissed by the doberman man while he takes care of his girl at the same time. I’m dead, but I’m pretty sure this isn’t a canon endgame sadly 🫠 I wish it stayed as a throuple

It has a lot of potential, but sadly the sexual scenes take precedents over the emotional ones. It’s so annoying but I see the vision

A micro-trope that I love to see. The MMC taking care of the FMC on her period ♥️

Considering I deal with depression, I worry for Lily. Sometimes people intentionally do reckless things in hopes it’ll lead to a bad outcome. It’s a form of suicide not commonly known or discussed. I think that’s what she’s doing :( poor girl 💔 I want to hug her so badly

Okay so he’s a good dirty talker 👀 noted ✍️

He’s literally feral for her hehehehehe

Oh boy. Lily and I have a few things in common it seems 💔