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is 64% done
A woman, well into the second trimester of pregnancy, rushes home for something. Upon finding her 5yo on the roof refusing to come down, she decides just this once she will let her daughter fly! So the kid jumps and the pregnant mother catches her…WHAT THE HELL
— Aug 21, 2026 06:34AM
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Sarah
is 64% done
I’m struggling with this. The writing feels forced. Like the dialogue and some of the descriptions of minute actions just piss me off for some reason. A character hits a traffic jam running late: “She pressed the brake pedal, bringing the car to a stop, and slumped against the seat.” Idk.
— Aug 19, 2026 06:52AM