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A Mother's Love by Andy Peloquin
Well. A long story, which could have been shorter if the world had been a tad simpler, but it needed a lot of explaining. I guess it belongs to a bigger universe of existing stories, but for someone who doesn't know anything about it, I could have done with less world-building and a more concise focus on the theme.
I didn't hate it, but I'm not sure I liked it either.
— 12 hours, 4 min ago
Well. A long story, which could have been shorter if the world had been a tad simpler, but it needed a lot of explaining. I guess it belongs to a bigger universe of existing stories, but for someone who doesn't know anything about it, I could have done with less world-building and a more concise focus on the theme.
I didn't hate it, but I'm not sure I liked it either.
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My Soul Has Teeth - Sarah Chorn
ahhhh I'm a bit sad, the writing is so beautiful but the world it is set in doesn't grip me at all. I just can't picture the characters, which is the biggest problem for my brain to enjoy this.
— Aug 13, 2026 11:01AM
ahhhh I'm a bit sad, the writing is so beautiful but the world it is set in doesn't grip me at all. I just can't picture the characters, which is the biggest problem for my brain to enjoy this.
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--The Old Lie by Ryan Cahill--
A slice of classic high fantasy wrapped up with an inkling of what's to come in the original series. Makes me curious!
— Aug 07, 2026 11:30PM
A slice of classic high fantasy wrapped up with an inkling of what's to come in the original series. Makes me curious!