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That’s right everyone I’m reading GRIMALKA OH YEAHHH
(i’m actually so hyped for this, but unfortunately it’s gonna be slow going bc of school and my already slammed reading schedule)
Emily thank you thank you thank you for letting me read this! I’m so excited to finally partake in the world I’ve heard so much about!
Rating prediction: 4.5-5 stars
Favorite character assumption: Cuba
— Aug 21, 2026 04:21PM
(i’m actually so hyped for this, but unfortunately it’s gonna be slow going bc of school and my already slammed reading schedule)
Emily thank you thank you thank you for letting me read this! I’m so excited to finally partake in the world I’ve heard so much about!
Rating prediction: 4.5-5 stars
Favorite character assumption: Cuba
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Okay so Emily Keira told me you may be taking Grimalka back to edit for a bit at the end of September. I wish I could say I have the time to keep reading but alas, I do not. BUT I do want to keep reading and I do love the story! Don’t feel disheartened that it’s awful bc it’s not automatically getting 5 stars from everyone. This is probably gonna get a 4.5-5 from me anyway even with the things I pointed out!!
— Sep 14, 2026 05:52AM
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Not very far, my life has gotten rlly crazy lately so I’ve had no time to edit my own stuff, let alone someone else’s. I will get around to finishing what Emily sent me, definitely by the end of fall and before winter. It’s just slow going rn
— Sep 05, 2026 07:24AM
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I know everything i’ve said so far sounds rlly negative but did I am loving this book 👏Emily you are actually a phenomenal writer don’t let the edits and critiques make you think otherwise! They’re just there to help make sure it’s the best it possibly can be and honestly you should be proud! I really have hardly any critiques besides the few earlier (which aren’t even big changes)
— Aug 26, 2026 11:12AM
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Not sure how far I am into Grimalka but my thoughts thus far from both a reader and an editors standpoint.
Reader standpoint: Very intriguing. I def want to keep reading and know more. I love Cuba, Lilian, and Beebe, though I’m not connecting with Fallon all that much. The world building is this books strongest aspect rn.
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— Aug 25, 2026 09:50AM
Reader standpoint: Very intriguing. I def want to keep reading and know more. I love Cuba, Lilian, and Beebe, though I’m not connecting with Fallon all that much. The world building is this books strongest aspect rn.
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this is so httyd coded *melts in a puddle* i can’t even start to explain how big a httyd fan i am. like it was my life blood growing up and my world basically revolved around it for the better half of my childhood
— Aug 21, 2026 05:03PM
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Ohh wow! An honor, indeed 🥰💜 I hope you enjoy it💜💜 Haha, according to the YouTube features so far, Cuba has been my favorite 👍🏻
AH I’M SO EXCITED FOR YOU TO READ THIS! Thank you SO MUCH!And take your time, girl! As long as it’s done by Christmas, you’re ay-ok 😂
And Cuba is my favorite character 🤭
And if you’d like to, that would be so helpful! Any time of critique is a blessing! Keira did SUCH a good job on helping me refine the punctuation, storyline, and other such structure!
(Am I the only one who likes zombie stories? 🤣 The Maze Runner and I Am Legend very much inspired those creepy monsters. But don’t worry, it’s not the main focus of the story, though they do play an important role)
Yeah, I hate zombie stories too, but I didn’t hate this one, so that’s a win 😂 Hope you enjoy, Finch! You’re a great editor (and you have an unhealthy obsession with Revival)
🎶Jealousy is not a Christian attribute and yet I have it so much lately🎶 @Emily when I heard there were zombies my first thought was Scorch Trials and I got really excited, so like….
LOL I knew Cuba would be the fan-favorite 🤣@Katniss The Scorch Trials was a big part in my inspiration for the Infected, though I’d say they look and act more like the monsters from the movie I Am Legend with Will Smith



Also idk if you wanted me to offer any line editing/editing advice at all but if you’d like another opinion on it I’d love to offer my services. I’m a very amateur editor but I feel like I do an okay job when I help Keira (and don’t listen to what she says about me and Revival, it’s all a lie, trust me)
But AHHHH IM SO EXCITED!!
I will say I’m hesitant about the “zombie-esk” people with the sickness. I hate stuff like that with a passion but am willing to try again especially for something written by someone so incredibly talented. (And I 10000% agree with Keira when she says your writing is like shards of obsidian. I was never able to describe how sharp and darkly beautiful your writing is until she gave that description and it’s just *chefs kiss*)