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Just throwing people’s thoughts on the page without attributing the thoughts to the character does not make for good character building.
— Aug 22, 2026 06:56AM
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Patrina
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The baron’s daughter just called this Black man “boy “…while she’s riding a horse and has a rope tied around the man’s waist that connects to her waist…he’s walking and she’s riding. Yeah…
— Aug 26, 2026 12:55PM
Patrina
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More dialogue than description, which is why it’s so difficult to get into the story.
— Aug 26, 2026 12:49PM
Patrina
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“The girl surveyed the boy. ‘Why is he so dirty? Couldn’t you have washed him?’
‘We did wash him, darling,’ her father replied.
The blond bit his lip.
‘But this seems to be his normal color.’”
IKYFL
— Aug 24, 2026 12:43PM
‘We did wash him, darling,’ her father replied.
The blond bit his lip.
‘But this seems to be his normal color.’”
IKYFL
Patrina
is on page 11 of 176
No idea how these characters are related to each other.
— Aug 22, 2026 06:52AM
Patrina
is on page 9 of 176
Did the Baron really say “hiccup”, or did the Baron hiccup? Egads…
— Aug 22, 2026 06:50AM
Patrina
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Is buffoon the only insult available? Mongrel is RIGHT THERE. Donkey’s backside.
Do the Baron and Baroness not have names? Does the castle not have a name?!
“Briefcase” did not exist in this time period…
— Aug 22, 2026 06:48AM
Do the Baron and Baroness not have names? Does the castle not have a name?!
“Briefcase” did not exist in this time period…