Ciphertext’s Reviews > Vessel of Woven Night > Status Update

Also why is there a dragon now???

Finally actually interesting shit, Baba Yaga should have hit Cylvan way harder. But also why is everything so bizarre? Every time Saffron is alone with Ryder it's just weird and doesn't make sense. God, this needed a serious round of edits

Screaming that Saffron thought any of what just happened was a good idea, but also relieved to finally be away from Cylvan whom I am no longer rooting for

Once upon a time I liked how imperfect and bratty Cylvan was, now he is just pissing me off

Why did it take 220 pages for something interesting to happen? Also why is it that the drama starts every time Saffron and Cylvan have sex? I am starting to anticipate it and not in the good way RIP

If there is one thing this book needed, it was an editor to advise trimming it down by about half. Why did we need 2 full pages of reporters asking questions one after the other? I have spent 211 pages so far wishing only for Graves to get to the point, which was a small issue in book 1, but now it is the reason I am no longer enjoying this story