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Another ARC I was approved for this week - romantasy this time!
However I’m already annoyed on page 1 due to the sentence structure and in general “I’m a badass 😘” vibe from the FMC :/
A guard is “crowding her space” threatening her but she’s .. walking ahead of him? Have they stopped to talk or are they still walking ?? Doesn’t make sense
— Aug 24, 2026 08:26AM
However I’m already annoyed on page 1 due to the sentence structure and in general “I’m a badass 😘” vibe from the FMC :/
A guard is “crowding her space” threatening her but she’s .. walking ahead of him? Have they stopped to talk or are they still walking ?? Doesn’t make sense
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