Josiane Claremont’s Reviews > The Deathless One > Status Update

Is the god breaking the fourth wall saying “I’m realizing you don’t know the difference” or is this actual character dialogue?

Weak. The antagonists are weak.

#NotMyThroneScene cuz that’ll always be Xaden and Violet in Iron Flame.

Why did she get so dark she has NO CAUSE besides meeting reality again and again. Poor character development istg.

The book needs to distinguish more clearly the lines between patrons, worshippers, and gravesingers.

Okay literally this god stuff makes absolutely no sense.

Simmering with the need to finish this book. Can I please go more than a chapter without mentions of witches, gravesingers, black/charcoal, touch, prissy princesses, and an emo god named Elric? Oh and the worst offense, chai TEA?! NO NO NO

Cliché cliché cliché but at least it’s easy.

The princess hasn’t done anything remotely questful and now she’s going DRESS SHOPPING. IDK MAYBE DO SOMETBHING FOR THE PLOT FIRST GOSH DARN IT

How am I this far into the book and still I feel no substance besides the princess being prissy and the god being emo