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Ryan Berger
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This got better, don’t think it sucks anymore but just wish this was written in a higher register of language. That + some inconsistent characterization but this is taking shape in a way I can respect.
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Ryan Berger
is on page 33 of 186
Shocking and arresting premise. Through 30 pages: Not very good. In fact, it’s rubbing me the wrong way in a couple very acute and specific ways that makes this good teach-tape to tell young writers: “maybe do not write like this”
— Aug 23, 2026 10:36AM