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Fantasy
is 33% done
I dont understand the problems here. Especially why she's reluctant to consider herself to become the bride? Like wtf is the "obvious" part about "there's no future for Sebastian and I?" The psychology of the characters also makes no sense. The writing is either for very YA or the author doesnt trust the intelligence of the reader.
— 4 hours, 1 min ago
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Fantasy
is 23% done
Im 23% through the book. Here are my predictions:
FMC is some special type of magical creature. Sebastian originally came to be her neighbor as an undercover mission to get close to FMC for access to special power she has. Hes probably the prince or at least secretly fae. She wont be able to tell him the deal. Reliance on dark silver eyes will create love triangle.
I truly dislike the writing/rendering of the story.
— Aug 25, 2026 03:55PM
FMC is some special type of magical creature. Sebastian originally came to be her neighbor as an undercover mission to get close to FMC for access to special power she has. Hes probably the prince or at least secretly fae. She wont be able to tell him the deal. Reliance on dark silver eyes will create love triangle.
I truly dislike the writing/rendering of the story.
Fantasy
is 13% done
Juvenile and uninteresting writing so far. I truly hope I dont have to DNF. The plot twists are visible from 3000 yards. The "im not like other women" is truly disappointing. The mashup of classic Disney components are overwhelming and cliche. It definitely feels like a bedtime story. I hate that im hating it.
— Aug 24, 2026 07:20AM
Fantasy
is 13% done
The storytelling so far is a bit too juvenile for my preferences.
— Aug 24, 2026 07:08AM