Mary’s Reviews > A Light in the Flame > Status Update
Mary
is 58% done
Sera, girl, please don’t piss me off. (SPOILERS—probably)
CLEARLY YOU ARE THE PRIMAL OF LIFE STOP DENYING THAT AND CHASING THIS DUMBASS PLAN AND JUST OWN IT ALREADY
Ash is starting to feel sketchy to me because he’s really gunning after this plan that *he’s* to obtain the embers so he’ll be Life AND Death. Bro y’all are supposed to be King and Queen of that, not just the dude as king. Duh.
— Aug 27, 2026 02:24PM
CLEARLY YOU ARE THE PRIMAL OF LIFE STOP DENYING THAT AND CHASING THIS DUMBASS PLAN AND JUST OWN IT ALREADY
Ash is starting to feel sketchy to me because he’s really gunning after this plan that *he’s* to obtain the embers so he’ll be Life AND Death. Bro y’all are supposed to be King and Queen of that, not just the dude as king. Duh.
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Mary
is 75% done
I’m increasingly frustrated.
(Spoiler ahead)
GIRL YOURE A MFING PRIMAL FUCKING ACCEPT IT AND NYKTOS NEEDS TO ACKNOWLEDGE THAT AND YOU SHOULD NOT BE TAKING THREE BOOKS TO STEP INTO YOUR POWER THIS COULDVE BEEN AN EMAIL
— 10 hours, 31 min ago
(Spoiler ahead)
GIRL YOURE A MFING PRIMAL FUCKING ACCEPT IT AND NYKTOS NEEDS TO ACKNOWLEDGE THAT AND YOU SHOULD NOT BE TAKING THREE BOOKS TO STEP INTO YOUR POWER THIS COULDVE BEEN AN EMAIL
Mary
is 71% done
I feel like this is a play by play description. (SPOILERS AHEAD)
Finally meeting Kolis. Hopefully she stabs him. Getting fed up with Nyktos/Ash. He probably has some valid reason/excuse blah blah blah but I don’t want to hear it. Sera needs to start doing things her way, forget the man for a little bit and solve the problem you originally set out to fix.
— 12 hours, 29 min ago
Finally meeting Kolis. Hopefully she stabs him. Getting fed up with Nyktos/Ash. He probably has some valid reason/excuse blah blah blah but I don’t want to hear it. Sera needs to start doing things her way, forget the man for a little bit and solve the problem you originally set out to fix.
Mary
is 49% done
I don’t like their plan. The true outcome that they’re actively steering away from feels obvious. They’re just stubborn. Specifically Ash. It’s like a waiting game wondering how many sidequest hoops are they going to jump through before doing what was obviously the first and correct choice. I can’t elaborate more without spoilers, but you get the idea.
— Aug 27, 2026 10:03AM