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It's fun, a decent disaster story, though pretty much fully outdated in pre-Apollo tech and morals. One of the first points of action was to ask the present woman to help make lunch.
A lot of time is spent on evaluating the progress of humanity and that of the male POV characters. As a result, the word 'man' often is splattered about a dozen times on the pocked sized pages which gets quite tiresome.
— Aug 27, 2026 10:15PM
A lot of time is spent on evaluating the progress of humanity and that of the male POV characters. As a result, the word 'man' often is splattered about a dozen times on the pocked sized pages which gets quite tiresome.
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Oh, all 'Electrosecreteries' were 'She'.
That will probably not balance out pretty much everything else and their dogs being men though.
— Sep 09, 2026 11:17AM
That will probably not balance out pretty much everything else and their dogs being men though.