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Okay so really curious if Leo is gonna get charged with battery or something for possibly killing an old lady
— Aug 28, 2026 12:54PM
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I am no DV expert, but something about this representation doesn't sit well with me. Maybe it is because Mal is actually unhinged and Rowan's concern for her is actually valid - that doesn't mean his actions for control are valid, but his concern definitely is. It makes me question the opening of the book - Mal hiding away to play a mobile game and if Rowan is a control freak obsessed with image - why didn't he react
— Aug 31, 2026 06:38AM
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So far, everyone is annoying...the unhingedness is not carrying me through
— Aug 28, 2026 09:37AM