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Alder
is 34% done
And why does this story take 14 and a bit of an hour?It’s just a story that’s been dragged out far too much, where the author wants to have two characters in bed, throwing in a bit of world-building, a conflict between representatives of different races, a ‘far-fetched’ problem in the form of a ‘terminal illness’, and just some repetitive, pointless back-and-forth dialogue between the main characters. Boring.
— Aug 28, 2026 02:50PM
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