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Melina S
is 35% done
The just had the same conversation about putting Kalon on the payroll on page 164 that they had on page 119. 😕
— Aug 30, 2026 12:34AM
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Melina S
is 59% done
Why does my brain do this to me? Can't it just read for fun anymore? 😂
Two years ago, I wouldn't have noticed that at the beginning of the book, the espresso machine was old and cranky. But then, not one scene ago the machine was brand new because of the new 'owner.' But now it's back to being old again, and she has to replace a gasket!
— Aug 30, 2026 04:54PM
Two years ago, I wouldn't have noticed that at the beginning of the book, the espresso machine was old and cranky. But then, not one scene ago the machine was brand new because of the new 'owner.' But now it's back to being old again, and she has to replace a gasket!
Melina S
is 29% done
Please consider working with a developmental editor. It’s a great story with genuinely good writing, but the continuity and scene slips keep pulling me out.
— Aug 29, 2026 08:19PM