Avery Northern’s Reviews > Eye of the Storm > Status Update

It was getting better for a second there. And then...that...

I'm seriously so bored of it. This mf really thinks there are women so deprived of male sexual attention that they go psychotic. He writes about it all the time. Men will fuck a hot pocket. Male sexual attention is so abundant as to be virtually worthless on its own. Also no woman as smart as Victoria (or either of the Olivias or any other hysteric he writes) would go that insane for lack of dick.

Neiderman looooooves to write single women as bitter, ugly, miserable women who are jealous of pretty women no matter how successful and intelligent they are and act like he's being feminist for doing so.

I'm trying really hard not to judge and to put myself in Rain's shoes but unfortunately putting myself in her shoes is making me judge harder because in her shoes there is no way on God's green earth I would ever sign those papers. Like she knows this is a mistake even as she's doing it. What the hell.

THAT'S why she's not doing anything to get herself out of this situation??? Is a physical therapist sleeping with a consenting and grown ass client even that big of a scandal? And if so, why wasn't she selflessly thinking of how the scandal would affect him when she was fucking him? Why only now? Right, because it's just a dumb excuse to keep her around when she is perfectly capable of leaving.

This is what I mean when I say this mf can't write consistent characters for shit. She spent the last two books not caring about clothes and now suddenly she's scolding herself for not buying any new clothes since her accident and talking about how important it is that she wear pretty shoes.

I freely admit that I'm no expert, but is it safe to have sex while recovering from a bladder infection?

These people have more money than god. Is there a reason they can't keep the Rolls that Rain is attached to AND get a van that would be more practical for her?

"I have a step brother and a half sister." Girl last I checked you had a half brother, two half sisters, and an adopted brother. Plus your dead adopted sister and your dead half brother. You have no step siblings."

"This black home nurse is no Gone With the Wind mammy!" *Author pats self on back*
*Two pages later*
"And that's bad because she's a mean old ableist bitch."