Valerie’s Reviews > The Atlas Complex > Status Update

I know it's a stylistic choice to start every sentence the same way. However, it just feels bad here. "The problem is" like for 5 sentences yet I don't feel any emotional weight or anything really behind it so it just feels bad and cheap and meh

Half the time it's actually not that bad. Then it gets pretty bad but that makes the rest seem better than it is. Anyways Reina is such a boring unlikeable character who apparently just dislikes everyone for no reason it's getting boring

So far I've read the descriptions of the characters. Which already pissed me off cause why is it written so weirdly and sometimes NYUMA is spelled out and sometimes abbreviated it's not even coherent.

Then the literal first paragraph. It starts like it would be smth cool but then it's literally a this, and this, and this. Like c'mon it could've been cool but it's just whack and cheap now