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Valerie
is on page 188 of 496
I know it's a stylistic choice to start every sentence the same way. However, it just feels bad here. "The problem is" like for 5 sentences yet I don't feel any emotional weight or anything really behind it so it just feels bad and cheap and meh
— 7 hours, 31 min ago
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Valerie
is on page 147 of 496
Half the time it's actually not that bad. Then it gets pretty bad but that makes the rest seem better than it is. Anyways Reina is such a boring unlikeable character who apparently just dislikes everyone for no reason it's getting boring
— 10 hours, 33 min ago
Valerie
is on page 10 of 496
So far I've read the descriptions of the characters. Which already pissed me off cause why is it written so weirdly and sometimes NYUMA is spelled out and sometimes abbreviated it's not even coherent.
Then the literal first paragraph. It starts like it would be smth cool but then it's literally a this, and this, and this. Like c'mon it could've been cool but it's just whack and cheap now
— Sep 03, 2026 01:54AM
Then the literal first paragraph. It starts like it would be smth cool but then it's literally a this, and this, and this. Like c'mon it could've been cool but it's just whack and cheap now