Rin’s Reviews > Spark of the Everflame > Status Update

Gosh. Good world building but I can't stand annoying FMC and the poorly written enemies to lovers trope. There's a fine line between flawed and just simply an annoying and dumb character. 1 or 2 star idc. Y'all who like shit like this have poor taste.

Dumbass nameless woman, dumbass FMC, dumbass man. These two women know the rules and still deciced to protect the child. Dumbass. I'm with the man tho he's also a dumbass. Should've used better protection smh.

Gawd this is so cringey. Do i really wanna read this all the way when I've read this far in just a day?

Yet another classic trope of getting horny because your enemy is too hot!! Who cares he's the enemy he's hottt!

Priority dear priority! Don't act like your action won't affect others!!!

Wait. It's kinda bothering me how many male characters I read recently are named Henry...

"Robotically" in a fantasy world.... Is there no similar words?

Ok pick me, keep burning!!!

Huh why did she suddenly ask Maura if Luther said anything about her mother? Ugh I hate when I get into something and there's hints of bad writing like this.