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I like the plot but the writing is not pleasant to read. I can’t explain why. It’s like following many lines at the same time. A sentence inside a sentence inside the main sentence with different subject comparisons and metaphors
Sep 03, 2026 12:13PM
Death's Daughter (Children of the Old Ones, #1)

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Plot holes and the romance is rushed
Sep 03, 2026 04:35PM
Death's Daughter (Children of the Old Ones, #1)


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